Sunday, 2 September 2012

Big Blue Boat

I wrote this poem cos i liked the title and i have had it floating around in my head for a while. The first version of the poem was longer but when i looked at it i thought that they were too many words - some words i didn't need - so i got rid of them and will save them and use them in another pome on another day.

Big Blue Boat

I dreamed i sailed on a big blue boat
i sailed across the sea
thats all this poem is about
that dream, that boat and me



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